What's your idea of an ideal quicksand scene?

[scooterjack]

I 'm old school. My favorite quicksand scenario is the basic jungle safari adventure. No plot needed, just the damsels wearing tight short safari shorts, sinking in quicksand. I like the idea of the damsels getting in the bog internationally. The expedition is briefed that quicksand is everywhere in this jungle, but it's not deep. The damsels step in the bog, and at first it's no more than knee deep, but all of a sudden they settle in to crotch deep, and an intense strugle begins. Loud sound effects, the bog rippling, hissing, farting, slurping at the damsels tight shorts. I like happy endings, so they get saved by their husbands, who are aroused by the situation, ending with the damsels exhausted by the bog, with their tigh khaki shorts competely soiled by the bog.

[Fred588]

Did you mean intentionally?

I 'm old school. My favorite quicksand scenario is the basic jungle safari adventure. No plot needed, just the damsels wearing tight short safari shorts, sinking in quicksand. I like the idea of the damsels getting in the bog internationally. The expedition is briefed that quicksand is everywhere in this jungle, but it's not deep. The damsels step in the bog, and at first it's no more than knee deep, but all of a sudden they settle in to crotch deep, and an intense strugle begins. Loud sound effects, the bog rippling, hissing, farting, slurping at the damsels tight shorts. I like happy endings, so they get saved by their husbands, who are aroused by the situation, ending with the damsels exhausted by the bog, with their tigh khaki shorts competely soiled by the bog.

[Kipcicles2]

For me, clay of all substances is best for an erotic/sexual but a fun/playful scene.

Two girls - one with short, lighter brown hair with an upturned nose and green eyes wearing casual wear. The other with longer, wavier golden hair, wearing casual clothes with an upturned nose and freckles with multi-coloured eyes. They would be lesbians lost in the forest until they come across a river. The brown haired girl would try to walk over to the river bank but would get slowly sucked into an oozing brown abyss with her girlfriend laughing at first, but then that turns into depression as the tip of the pretty brown haired girl's nose disappears into the muck with splishes and splashes of bubbles.

Later on, the freckled golden haired girl would see a wolf in the forest, so she runs away without looking where she is going and stumbles into a clay pit. Over time, she struggles to break free but she sinks until just her face is left surfaced. Then the wolf would come back so the cute girl chooses to sink down under never to be seen again...

[fp450+7]

1). Clay

2). Some light bondage

3). Nadya Nabakova

[Duncan Edwards]

1). Clay

2). Some light bondage

3). Nadya Nabakova

I think that's a scene with excellent potential.

[Fred588]

She can certainly book a shoot if she wants!

[some_writer_guy]

I know I have to be the pickiest guy on here...

For me, an "ideal" quicksand scene is a complete work of art. There must be a good plot, and believable at that, within the confines of the character and the plot of the story. I can't enjoy a scene where I have to question things like "Why is she wearing that?", "Why is she in the woods/on the beach/etc. in the first place?, or, "Who is this, and why should I care?" If a lady is not dressed realistically for the scene, or the scene itself is wholly unbelievable or seemingly out of place without proper context, it does nothing for me.

That said, I usually prefer fully-clothed women, and a scene with dramatic buildup. While a good dramatic scene for purposes like disposing of a villain, death scene in a mystery, suicide, or a scene to add to the suspense of a dangerous setting can make for a great sequence; I genuinely prefer viewing, reading and writing quicksand scenes in the horror genre. In this setting, the quicksand/mud can be used as both an antagonist or killer on its own (sic. Dead Island 2, School's Out) , or as a method in or tool (even weapon) the antagonist intentionally uses to kill the victim, or to trap them until they can be killed (sic. Nightmare on Elm Street series).

My Originals:
I understand that this fetish is very personal and subjective, my idea of a perfect scene will differ greatly from that of some of you. That said, as an amateur writer, I have created a great many scenes over the years, and will list some, a few from stories I've written, and others just standalone QS stories, just to give you ideas of what I consider "Ideal". I'll just give you the CliffNotes versions of the scenes. If you'd like me to share any in their entirety, let me know, and I gladly will.

- Dark and violent kidnapping/murder story. A young female bodyguard is protecting the young daughter of a wealthy family who is working against human trafficking rings, who want to hurt the family. She grows to treat the young girl like a younger sister. In the scene, the bodyguard and girl are alone at a summer home in South Carolina, on Murell's Inlet. The bodyguard is wearing a lightweight black suit and tie, aviator sunglasses, and dressy flip-flops. Bad guys kidnap the young girl, and board a small motorboat before taking off, parallel to a mud flat. The bodyguard sees them, and tries to run to the water, across the mud flat. She sinks up in the mud, and can't get out. As the little girl screams for her, the bodyguard sinks in the mud, fighting up until the moment she goes under.

-Old West zombie story (I kid you not, but the scene is graphic and bloody) A disease unearthed at an isolated gold mine turns the miners and town residents into the walking dead. Meanwhile, a young (19 years old) female Pinkerton Detective (who is foul-mouthed, wears men's clothes, and is a bit arrogant) pursues a gang of train robbers to the town. Eventually, the detective girl is trapped in the Jail house with the 3 surviving gang members, the deputy, and three other characters, including the male and female leads. The Detective volunteers to go for help. She ends up near the mine where the whole thing started. Still pursued by several zombies, she runs into a lake of wet, silty mud from the mine. Trapped and sinking, she dies a very gruesome and slow death as her pistol (jammed full of mud) explodes in her hand, and she's pulled down and slowly eaten by several zombies who have sunk under the mud themselves.

-Possessed/haunted plantation. (IF THIS ONE VIOLATES FORUM RULES, PLEASE LET ME KNOW, AND I WILL DELETE IT) A derelict plantation on the bayou was the site of dark rituals, murders, and human sacrifice (including the sacrifice of virgin women, which will play into the story later). A group of people, including a group of ghost-hunters and a newlywed couple and a friend who broke down nearby are trapped and hunted and killed by an evil and invisible force on the plantation and its grounds, as each kill makes the force stronger. In the single short qs scene, the young bride, wearing a short, white wedding dress, white stockings, white platform sandals and white gloves is running through tall grass in a muddy field near the house. She gets stuck in mud, and slowly sinks, as what feels like hands made of mud pull her down. Once she's so deep, she's violated by the mud. Not a very long or descriptive scene for obvious reasons, but you get the vague idea that the mud forces itself on her, and forces itself into every orifice as she sinks.

I have more if any of this seems interesting to any of you.

Fanfictions:

-Black Lagoon (anime): An assassin/mercenary girl who dresses as a ballerina (and is in fact uses ballet as a fighting style...you just have to watch the show to understand) jumps off of a large tree root, and lands in mud in a mangrove swamp, getting stuck. She sinks only to her thighs in the scene, but the rival gang of her employer finds her, and mocks her fate from a boat, letting the tide come in and drown her.

-Final Destination: (Though not technically qs/mud) The character (third to die) is an 18 year old tomboy who lives/works on a farm. In the scene, she is wearing a short-sleeved plaid shirt, jeans with a large rodeo buckle, tall pink rubber rain-boots, work gloves and a wide-brimmed tan cowboy hat. She climbs down into a concrete room below the large horse barn. It is explained in the story that waste from the horse barn collects in the chamber, and the job she hates most is when she has to stir the caked manure, urine and water up near and above the massive diesel pump, so that it can pump it out to the holding pond near the barn. As death stalks her, the farm girl's rubber boots get stuck ankle deep in the "strangely" thick excrement over the pump grate. As she struggles to get free, a metal bar "falls" and hits the ignition on the pump. She breaks through the small, corroded grate, and begins being sucked down by the pump, along with the contents of the chamber. The broken grate catches her twice-once on her huge rodeo buckle, and again on her large breasts before she is sucked under, leaving her wide-brimmed hat on the surface. The other survivors arrive in time to see her body shot from the 18" discharge pipe into the pond.

-Child's Play/Chucky story: Scene is about the young woman (19, college student) who babysits the boy who comes into possession of the killer doll. She is a skinny woman with shaggy brown hair and braces, and is wearing a black hoodie, gray scarf, ripped skinny jeans over fishnet leggings. Chucky empties her backpack, and climbs inside before she leaves, planning to kill her on her way home. As she is bicycling through a logging operation, trying to avoid muddy patches and pools of water, Chucky attacks her, causing her to wreck. She manages to fight him off, getting stabbed in the leg, and she starts pedaling away, and right into a deep pit of mud. Chucky remarks evilly: "I'll...be damned..." as he watches the girl, bicycle and, all sink into the mud

[Herzeleid]

For me I prefer the gradual, slow sink, preferably from waist deep. The thought of the victim being slowly, inexorably sucked under is the real turn on . Even better if they are wearing tight, shiny tops / dresses. The Angelique Kithos scene " Boot Shoot " from studio 588 is a perfect example of the type of scene I'm describing.

[SecretDude77]

A muddypinays style dramatic scene but with an Indian girl, wearing something tight.

Pls

[Acidtester]

I just want to see a beautiful woman (preferably redhead) be forced to suck cock to avoid drowning in quicksand, only to drown in quicksand anyways with a mouthful of high fructose porn syrup.