bbjohn wrote:That's not bad. Not bad at all! It sort of reminds me of the pencil tests I've done of my own work. You obviously have some talent here. I'm looking forward to seeing what the finished version is like.
You have a nice, fluid motion to her as she moves. That's quite impressive, and not always easy to do.
There was one thing I noticed, however. It looks like she's shrinking. I'm not sure if this was deliberate or not. It could be the camera is pulling away from her as she goes down.
I was wondering how you plan to color this, if you plan to color it at all. I use either acrylic craft paints or I use Photoshop. I've found these give a much better, more uniform appearance to the colors than pencils, markers, crayons or water colors. That's just a thought on my part.
As I said, I'm looking forward to seeing the finished results.
Big Bad John
Thank you


It's also really hard to see threw notebook paper.