Story ideas：Willing/Lighthearted + Fatal

[DeuteriumTritium]

Ok so.... where do I start
This thread would contain story ideas that I thought about... And they would be mostly about fatal submersion(s) without struggles(at least in the end)
e.g. Willing, Accepting, Consensual,
Mostly because, that's how I like them to be, but also because I don't think there are enough of them. (There's like 800 topics here but only like 20 - 30 are like this, saaaad)

*This might update slowly because of all sorts of things, thus you guys can also write story ideas here(as long as it fits criterium above). Maybe one day, people like Velocity, and Frederick would write some of those ideas.

[Solrex]

Maybe I could post a sequel or main story to my Shadowmire story where someone willingly goes to this deadly Shadowmire because they want a pleasurable suicide or something... I'm not sure, but that's something I could I could try doing in the future.

[Solrex]

Maybe I could post a sequel or main story to my Shadowmire story where someone willingly goes to this deadly Shadowmire because they want a pleasurable suicide or something... I'm not sure, but that's something I could I could try doing in the future.

[DeuteriumTritium]

1. Quicksand Festival
An event for all quicksand fetishists. The event takes place every year in some sinky jungle/swamp areas, where people can seek out and sink however deep they want to. Nudity is also socially-acceptable.

This can open up to a whole variety of mass sinking scenes like:

- Sinking Orchestra/Choir, the exotic performance group with talented fetishists that does brilliant performances every year in the last minutes before they relax at their audience's applause, and drown together happily.(Inspired by Frederick's idea of the sinking cheerleader, and PM2K's idea for the choir, pity we will never again see such good ideas from him )

- A clay pool with people swimming and diving

- Other ideas you would like to add

I would be so very grateful if this *twisted* idea actually becomes a full story or fakery fables

[velocity88]

I seem to have found a kindred spirit.

I like the idea of listing ideas for such stories which are a rarity here in our little corner of the Internet. That being said, I’m afraid that I, personally, already have a far greater overabundance of ideas for these stories than time to produce them. While I like to keep some a surprise, I would be happy to contribute to this thread if welcome, and would be open to hearing other ideas. I have no pride: if someone else wants to make a story of an idea of mine, then I would be happy to read it and see their take on it, and I’m happy to find an idea to write about that’s even better than one of my own.

Let the happy sinking begin.

[Chro_Zarco]

I'm liking this thread more and more.

An idea I had back when I first discovered this fetish took the idea of fatal submersion and added a magical twist. Like, the submersion of a young maiden in porous, bubbling clay as a price for a ritual, either of rebirth (potential for retread with a small cast of characters), summoning (the soul of the maiden is transposed into some automaton or to call specific daedities/avatars), or escape from a pact or promise. In each of these cases, the pleasurable aspects of the ritual sacrifice would be needed/desired for the ritual to be completed successfully.

[DeuteriumTritium]

I seem to have found a kindred spirit.

I like the idea of listing ideas for such stories which are a rarity here in our little corner of the Internet. That being said, I’m afraid that I, personally, already have a far greater overabundance of ideas for these stories than time to produce them. While I like to keep some a surprise, I would be happy to contribute to this thread if welcome, and would be open to hearing other ideas. I have no pride: if someone else wants to make a story of an idea of mine, then I would be happy to read it and see their take on it, and I’m happy to find an idea to write about that’s even better than one of my own.

Let the happy sinking begin.

Thank you!
While few people here actually enjoys stories of consensual submersion, there are I think many good reasons to popularize it... for example that this site is supposed to be twisted...

Currently we have a very large empty space in the consensual section, where Purple Monkey used to fill same in Manips. These need to be fixed or very soon the member submissions would be almost static.

[DeuteriumTritium]

I'm liking this thread more and more.

An idea I had back when I first discovered this fetish took the idea of fatal submersion and added a magical twist. Like, the submersion of a young maiden in porous, bubbling clay as a price for a ritual, either of rebirth (potential for retread with a small cast of characters), summoning (the soul of the maiden is transposed into some automaton or to call specific daedities/avatars), or escape from a pact or promise. In each of these cases, the pleasurable aspects of the ritual sacrifice would be needed/desired for the ritual to be completed successfully.

That could be a good story

[Niveous]

I always enjoy a good willing erotic submersion. Now if only I had the writing capabilities to do something with it lol. Though, one idea that's been swimming around in my mind is two lovers, one of which who wants to give herself to the sands, decides to make one last love session. What ends up happening is the willing one would lay on her back on the edge while the other eats her out, pushing her lover under in the process.

[Fred588]

I always enjoy a good willing erotic submersion. Now if only I had the writing capabilities to do something with it lol. Though, one idea that's been swimming around in my mind is two lovers, one of which who wants to give herself to the sands, decides to make one last love session. What ends up happening is the willing one would lay on her back on the edge while the other eats her out, pushing her lover under in the process.

I would encourage anyone with a story idea to give writing it a try. One thing to always remember in doing so: In a short story an extremely fundamental rule is that the writer (and subsequently the reader) can be inside only ONE CHARACTER's HEAD. That means that the writer can write what ONLY ONE character is feeling or thinking. Therefore, tell the story from the point of view of ONE of Three possible people. Those are either of the two characters mentioned or a third-party observer. Everything else has to be expressed through dialogue or actions. Exceptions to the above should be left, in my opinion, to experienced writers who have already mastered the basic technique.

Note, by the way, that this is a fundamental difference between writing a story and writing a stage or movie script. In the script you cannot be inside ANYONE's head. Everything has to be expressed through dialogue or actions.

For anyone who wants to try it, there is an exercise I have used several times for writing practice. First, try writing the story from the POV of character A. Then, write the same story again but from the POV of character B. [Or possibly character C].

Another difference between story writing and script writing, at least insofar as the script writing is limited to relatively short "scenes," is that for the script (or scenario) its usually ok to focus on "what happens." If a short story is just "what happens," however you generally get something that reads like it was written for a seventh-grade story exercise. A story needs to put the reader inside the character's head.