Quicksand Fans

I met Paetra this past fall and we had talked a lot about differant fetishes. Her's was shoes, and I asked her if I could enclude our two fetishes in a story. She actually had some input here and it really added to the scene. I hope the story is enjoyed by all. Comments are welcome.

Not bad at all. Now if only I could get off my duff and write a QS story, I have so many ideas jumbling in my head...

My previous efforts were a bit long on the introduction, so I tried to "Speed Up" the situation. I wonder what my old English Lit would think of these efforts.

My recomendations are to just do it DJLurker. Any mistakes are far easier to correct on the computer than on paper back in the day. I fail to recall how many times I went over the story to make it work and not appear forced. My stories always started jumbled too.

Now... can anyone figure out how the red ball gag was removed? I didn't write that part in. I will be having coffee and tea with the real world Paetra the 18th or 19th of Feb. She thanks everyone for reading it, (and is blushing now as I im'd her)

I always, always like your work.

Viridian wrote:I always, always like your work.

Thank you very much. I'll let her know as well. I am humbled.

I hope your summer is turning out great down under.

It's hot, just like your story.